Argument Strategies

I observed two different essays and I was able to pick up useful information from the both of them. The first essay that I read did a very good job making a valid argument. I was able to see how they constructed their essay and now I can use it to make my essay much better. The second essay I read was a little weaker than the first essay I read. They had a little trouble getting their argument across and their transition from paragraph to paragraph was not fluent. I took some notes on what I saw in this essay that made it not as good as the first. Now I know in the future when I’m writing my own essays which methods are effective and which methods are not.