Rough Draft Peer Review

The peer review that we did during class was quite beneficial for me. The person that looked over my essay found many mistakes in my essay that I overlooked when I was writing it. He also gave me some helpful information and some useful tips that I can implement in my final draft. One of the things mentioned was that I needed to improve the framework in my rough draft. He also said it might help if there were some quotes from George Bush in the section talking about why Bush decided to go to war and his plans once we invaded Iraq. He also said that there was a lot of information on public opinion. When I wrote my final draft, i took this into consideration and i shortened the paragraphs about the public opinion. There were many more suggestions that my grader made that helped me out when i revised my rough draft. All in all i believe this helped out a lot and my final draft was much better than my rough draft.